Jody Seaborn details David Dewhurst’s loss in the race for Texas
U.S. senate to Ted Cruz in the 2012 election. In the very opinionated article, “Dewhurstburned by a fire he could no longer control”, Seaborn knocks Dewhurst’s attempts
at victory as if they were meager and deserved a loss. Seaborn puts Dewhurst to
shame, stating that he is politically arrogant, non-participatory, absent at
forums, and an awful public speaker. Whether or not Seaborn’s opinion matters
is questionable, but the facts remain: Lt. Gov. David Dewhurst lost to Ted Cruz
by 14 points in this Texas election.
If Seaborn was attempting to report to Texas citizens, his
attempts were a success. The article is written with a clear intention, to
state how one man feels about a candidate in Texas. Seaborn fluidly
incorporates his opinion among the sea of facts that he presents and does it so
that the reader easily interprets the details. A major flaw in his
presentation, however is that the article is written with a somewhat overly
strong view. Immediately, the reader is able to tell that the author feels
distastefully about Dewhurst, but no other aspect of Dewhurst’s success is
given. The candidate obviously made it as far as he did on some kind of
momentum, but it is this author’s intention to completely mull over any
positive points that Dewhurst may have.
On the opposing end, Cruz, the winner of the election, is
given a fair amount of praise. It is obvious that Seaborn favors Cruz, but not
to the same extent that he dislikes Dewhurst.
The fact that Seaborn critiques Dewhurst without a bit of
mercy seems low and arrogant. Anyone can point out a lot of negative points in
a person and call it fact, but to compare and contrast Dewhurst’s strengths
with his weaknesses would have made a stronger argument. Although Seaborn
includes a load of facts to back up his opinion, his writing style comes across
as if his opinion is fact. Noting unforeseen occurrences, such as Cruz’s climb
to the top, Seaborn adds a “know-it-all” tone to his article. He is full of
facts and seemingly knowledgeable of a population consensus of the subject, but
Seaborn’s argument could use a little tweaking.
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